Writing Coherent Sentences English 1 B

Read the sentence. Brendan is playing in the backyard. This is an example of a

Which sentence contains a dangling modifier?

Read the paragraph. (1) Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. uses repetition to give his speech rhythm and momentum. (2) "Let freedom ring" is a phrase which is used many times in his speech. (3) "Let freedom ring" is a phrase that leads to an exciting conclusion. Which revision combines sentence 2 and sentence 3 most effectively?

Monica is writing about a pretty new dress. She replaces the word pretty with elegant because elegant is a more word choice.

Choose the pronoun that replaces the underlined word correctly. The runners were thrilled when Speedy Shoes offered the runners each a free pair of training shoes.

Choose the phrase that best completes the sentence with parallel elements. During our time in New York City, we traveled by taxi, rode in the subway, and even

Read the sentence. "Relax," said my tennis coach. "Your opponent is well trained, but she is no match for your powerful and accurate serve." Which commonly overused word can be replaced with a more effective choice?

Read the sentence. Pet canaries need large cages, wooden perches, some fresh water, and keep out of cold. Which phrase should be revised for a more parallel sentence?

Read the sentence. My father, an electrical engineer, patiently explained the confusing material in my science textbook. The underlined words are a(n)

Read the sentence. We knew Algerlynn must be angry because her features darkened and her speech became abrupt. Which is the most vivid choice to replace the underlined word?